(I thought it was probably a bit more pertinent to make a new thread rather than necro-post the old one. But for anyone interested, here is the thread I originally posted.)
Hello again fine people!
I took a lot of your advice, reworked my characters a bit, let them sit so I can come back with fresh eyes, and touched them up some more.
I have now some updated character art, and I would greatly appreciate it if someone could pick this apart, tell me everything you don't like about it, everything that needs to improve, everything that works, etc. Feel free to dig in and make me cry. I want honest feedback.
Try to look at this image as if it were a sample straight out of the final version of its game.
The full version is a bit big for embedding in forums, so here's an external link: https://imgur.com/cZ4oR6L
Here is a cropped version that shows just the characters:
Hello again fine people!
I took a lot of your advice, reworked my characters a bit, let them sit so I can come back with fresh eyes, and touched them up some more.
I have now some updated character art, and I would greatly appreciate it if someone could pick this apart, tell me everything you don't like about it, everything that needs to improve, everything that works, etc. Feel free to dig in and make me cry. I want honest feedback.
Try to look at this image as if it were a sample straight out of the final version of its game.
The full version is a bit big for embedding in forums, so here's an external link: https://imgur.com/cZ4oR6L
Here is a cropped version that shows just the characters: